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Sent you my QC comments through MSN.
Just gonna re-iterate them, there:
1. Page 8, Cell 2
- Place the original text "...?" inside the blank bubble.
- Do a text overlay, imitating the original
- Use white text and place it beside Takuto's face
- If it looks difficult to read, try put a drop shadow (F1 Photoshop when in doubt)
- It should end with "songs!" in the plural with an exclamation point
- Maybe we could try a more expressive fonts for screams or shouts of ecstasy, like that used in this translation. It doesn't have to look exactly like that, but my point is they used a different font than the main text, and it has more feeling to it.
Oh, and since Nemesis is actually part of LWB and not Vanilla, should I change the credits page? Plus, are we going to include Nash in the credits for QC?
~ed
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1. Fixed
2. You do it, I don't know what you mean
3. Fixed
4. No
2. You do it, I don't know what you mean
3. Fixed
4. No
~Tech
Update:
What I pointed out meant squat compared to the QC work Nash did. It was pretty meticulous - which I liked, very much - so that said, it motivated me to try re-typesetting the work, myself, while I asked Tech to focus on chapter 7. Typesetting status is around 50% complete... I'll finish it up when I get home later, today.
~ ed
Update:
What I pointed out meant squat compared to the QC work Nash did. It was pretty meticulous - which I liked, very much - so that said, it motivated me to try re-typesetting the work, myself, while I asked Tech to focus on chapter 7. Typesetting status is around 50% complete... I'll finish it up when I get home later, today.
Fwaaaaah!!
~ ed
You can be such a jerk, you know that? Stop being so fucking lazy and TRY to at least break a sweat every now and then. -_-;
ReplyDeleteI don't know what you mean by #2 and #4 is something that's beyond me atm kthxbai
ReplyDeleteI think for #4 Mew just used that font and slapped a red to black color gradient over it... certainly an eye-catcher, but not something I would use in all edits. I can ask him how he did that exactly though, if you want.
ReplyDeleteSent you my QC too, and it seems like I was even harsher lol
@nashrakh
ReplyDeleteActually, I really appreciate the amount of effort you put into meticulously pointing out those things. I guess I was being a little lazy QC-ing, because I just came from duty, and having to explain what I want done felt exasperating.
Basically, I agree to everything you said. :D
shouldn't it be 'it feels best here, around etc' instead of 'it feels best, here around etc' though?
ReplyDeleteI just typeset everything word for word from the script he provides ._.
ReplyDelete@nashrakh
ReplyDeleteYeah... I think it makes more sense that way... although if you want to be really grammatically correct, it should be "it feels best, here, around..." but that's comma whoring. D: I'll fix that up. :)
@mTech
ReplyDeleteCopy pasta. D: